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While the project is conceptually strong and offers a wide range of well-developed renderings, it would greatly benefit from more consistent layout and information conveyed across the four sheets. The varied layouts make it challenging for a viewer to simply navigate. The sheets are also overwhelmingly dark in color. Rather than blackness the author might explore the positive effects of lighter colors and daylight. The texts would benefit from reduced length and larger font sizes. Read more Nonetheless, the imagery is compelling and sophisticated.

The presentation assumes a clear and consistent layout that makes use of a primary image and a secondary detail or enlarged image within the same  virtual space. The effect is like a magnifying glass, positively bringing clarity to the design intent. The accompanying texts, however, are rather long and winding, and could be improved through reduction and precision. Read more The project simultaneously tackles many concepts and, while the presentation is ambitious and takes on many scales of thought, the author may consider distilling these ideas to yield a more powerful design statement. 

The project offers some enticing visuals, but it suffers from overwhelming use of body text and lack of descriptive texts to clarify the images and diagrams. Read more How has the form of this home been generated and how does this formal diagram relate to the development of the axonometrics, for instance? The author would benefit from greatly reducing the text, dividing it more evenly across the four sheets, while at the same time providing more specific annotation to clarify the concepts in each of the primary rendered images.  Finally, while many of the images are individually powerful, there is little relationship among the layout of the four sheets, and a well-communicated project always benefits from general consistency.